Drop Pop Candy

Okay, so this is my first critique so I apologize if not good. But overall, I think this is a good piece. I believe it is quite original in terms of its origins, and well thought out. I like the style of shading, as it fits well with the piece and its concept. I can also see there is attention to detail, as shown by the Vocaloid's clothes as well as other things. However, there are also things I don't like about this piece. While some of these things are simply personal preference, there are others that I would like to share. For example, Luka's (The pink-haired one, in case you don't know) torso seems just a bit too skinny to make sense. Also, some places seem a bit too angular on both. And this is the end of my critique~